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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The angle of the face is off however.
Her eyes, nose, and mouth aren' t all aligned in the correct way.
try working with references.
First, it looks like you need some anatomy practice. Possibly it's the angle, but her eyes look somewhat to far up her head. Did you have a reference for the pose? Even if you have to find a separate one for the character and the pose, it would help to show you how the features adjust with perspective. I would also add that an upward-facing angle like this is really tricky.
Second, you could really use some more contrast for the lighting. I really can't see half her features because there's no shading. Strong lights mean strong shadows, generally. References are good for this, too.
I do like the neck area, though; very detailed.
Great job on this dear ♥
In terms of shading and looking up, it might be an idea to google image search "girl looking up"
Try going over the outlines of a photograph like that, then delete the photograph, leaving your line art behind.
Then slowly morph your line art into your image of chell, and hey presto, you've just challenged yourself and created something new.